Crazy stuff
Not my style, but this isn't time for subjectivity.
I heard some clipping on the loud parts. The easiest way to fix this is with a limiter on the main channel. Good job, though.
I've never heard the original so I don't have much to go on, but this is still really good. However, the drums seemed a bit crazy. It feels like they're kinda disorganized. Also, the song kinda dragged on. It didn't change up too much, but then again, maybe I'm just not very insightful ;)
Hope that helps.