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Okay...

It's not the best action in the world...I dunno. My suggestion is that you learn how to *ease* your tweens. It makes things look so much better!

--alex

Hahahhaha, house

Nice and bouncy house tune! Great job! Keep up the good work Weebl.

Uh...

Okay story...I liked the stick guy's expressions...Yeah, those were good.

"jk about jk. jk!"

--alex

Not the best, but...

With a bit of work, you could be a very good FBF animator! Good job. The only problem was the lack of color (except for the rainbow), a story, and any sort of preloader.

My suggestions:
* get some color
* get a preloader. Newgrounds has some nice preloaders you can use!

Amazing! Absolutely Amazing!

This was a great stick fight! It was incredible! I don't give out 5's like M&M's, so you should be proud. ;)

The only problem was I had to force myself to keep watching the video. It got kinda boring after the first 20 seconds. I'm sure I'm the only one thinking so, but still, a guy can have an opinion, right?

Here's something that I think would have made it better for me, the viewer: More action with the environment. Crashing through buildings, throwing trash cans, that kind of stuff. I like actions scenes that are more than just two people fighting. I wanna see two people fighting *and going somewhere*! Running through parking garages, or office buildings, and that kind of thing. This would have been amazing (not that it isn't already) if there would have been some environmental stuff.

But I have no right to be criticizing a movie this good!

9/10 :)

Great Movie!

I know it's kinda cliche, but great movie! It was very funny, had great animation, and most of all, had a coherent story line. Nothing's good without a story line.

Also, the Great Fox part was funny.

Okay

...The song was okay. Nice graphics! The only really obvious problem was the pronounciation of "Moog." It's not like a cow goes "moo," it (according to wikipedia) is supposed to rhyme with rogue. Other than that, it was nice.

Not bad!

Not too much of a story line, or anything. It was very abstract, and had a slightly strange atmosphere to it, like some sort of Alice in Wonderland thing, where anything is possible.

Okay...I guess

Uh, it's an okay animation (if 'animation' is the right word). The music selection was nice--meaning I liked the song. The theme of the song didn't really fit though. Also, someone needs to read a flash tutorial about *tweens*! Graphics were 1/10, story was 4/10, audio was 1/10, animation was 1/10, etc., etc.

Btw, the presence of a somewhat coherent storyline was the only thing preventing this movie from getting *BLAMMED*.

ByterToss responds:

ty for the tip, i will work harder next time, much harder, i promisse xD

Uh....

No preloader, no menu, nothin. It was just a video. This might as well have been posted on YouTube. I thought maybe this video was going somewhere...but no. It just loops the video. Also, a bit more helpful description would be nice.

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